Argument Letter?

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Question by KH-Junky: Argument Letter?
pls add more point……….forget about the grammar! i just need more ideas!

I wish to comment on the letter that was sent to your paper for publishing about bringing down an old building located at (blahblahblah)

It was written that the building is going to be demolished to spare some space for the industrial zone. I think that is a bad idea because the people who live near the old building would need to bear weeks of unstop noise from the construction site. The amount of air pollution would increase in time causing the resident to migrate to another place.

I have a better idea which consists of converting it into a historical building. Why? I found out about the original frame of it, it was planned by (famous architect). If this news is spread over the world, more people would come as a tourist and increase the nation income. Wouldn’t it help?

I hope you agree with my idea. We can turn this area to a better place. All we need is some understanding and agreement. I’m looking forw

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Answer by dnldslk
Sorry, but you don’t need more ideas. You need to work on the expression of the ideas you have.
Tossing out ideas in such a sloppy fashion will not convince anyone to do as you wish.
And BTW, if an internationallly famous architect–someone on the caliber of FLW, for instance, was involved with the structure, you should contact a local college that offers degrees in architecture and try to get their support and involvement. That fact alone may be your best argument, and you need to go higher than the letters-to-the-editor readership.

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